The Henry

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Glad you liked it.

I liked the last stanza, how you related all the desperate struggles of the caged things to an author on his computer. Made everyone else writing on this website feel ...

I've taken your advice and done a little editing.

Thanks for reviewing. I wrote this one fast as soon as it popped into my head, and didn't proofread. Correcting now. Also.. when you see pew.. Imagine the seats in ...

Nate, i appreciate your review.. I have proofread this, but I just didn't notice some of those things. I wrote this in the little spare time I have. I'll make ...

Great poem the end I think in my opinion your last line with ending the poem...doesnt really do the poem justice. Feels unfinished anyhow it was fun reading it :) ...

I like the theme of the poem. A danger like that can't really be avoided.

Thanks for reading. I have more but i have to make some reviews first. The point system is a cool way of keeping the community involved.

Its very good! Keep writing, its just like my school days XD

Nice poem, I i share the same love XD